I got little work done on
Spanner and
Bad Company. You see, most of the last week belonged to my mother and brother. It was too hectic. But the next week is mine. I hope to get some work done. After all, there's only 10 days left in Script Frenzy, and MayNoWriMo is coming up at NaNoPubYe.
I have one sequence left in
Spanner #1: the terrorist attack foiled by Shira defusing yet another of the Toymaker's infuriatingly complex bombs, followed by the "rattlesnake flag" prank ("
Freiheit oder Tod!"). That's my last fully plotted sequence. After that, I'll have to get some more plotting done if I want to write the full 100 pages of script. Bring out the index cards...
Bad Company has been stalled since last month. Why? It's been refusing to come together. The plot still isn't very coherent. That seems to be coming to an end. I've got some wild new ideas to throw into the mix (and into
Black Science as well), which will not only tie the story together but increase the controversy quotient by a factor of at least 4 (rough guesstimation).
Since I've made so little progress on
Bad Company so far, I've decided to add another goal to MayNo: not just 50,000 words of
Black Science, but also 30 hours of editing to finish the second draft of
Bad Company as well. Plus, I still need to complete my drawing self-instruction so I can enter NaNoMangO.
The key idea for
Bad Company (and the newest one for
Black Science)?
Mad love. In other words, obsessive or forbidden love with the potential to provoke an outright revolution. This is one of the major ideas of
André Breton, founder of
Surrealism. And so some
yuri ideas and pairings that have been floating around my brain and the Project Notebook for years (since 1996 and my introduction to
yaoi under the full impact of
Camille Paglia) now have their perfect justification. And so now Desiree returns to prominence in
Bad Company — as the passionate lover of her own sister Charlie. They are famous, so they get into big trouble, and the Becket clan with them. Meanwhile, in
Black Science, Willa's husband, one Eric Blair in the past several years of Project Notebooks, is now
Dr. Julian Blair (named after a Boris Karloff mad-scientist antihero), the inventor of the brain scanner, who turns against her for the blood money offered him by Dictel and the US government. And the Cuban refugee scientist from the 2006 NaNoWriMo version, who becomes Willa's ally and lover, has been replaced by — Willa's own niece, who is as determined to marry her as her other nieces Charlie and Desiree are to marry each other. I'll have more about this in my next entry. I think I already know what to call it...
So I'm entering the homestretch in Script Frenzy, and I'd better make the most of it. After all, I'm going to have to pull off yet another come-from-behind...