Friday, August 17, 2012

Our Cyberpunk World: Your Brain Can Now Be Hacked

The article: Hackers backdoor the human brain, successfully extract sensitive data (Sebastian Anthony, ExtremeTech)

One technology that has become something of a cyberpunk cliché is the brain-computer interface. Recent developments have focused on sinister police uses. Now black-hat hackers have found a way to keep up with the secret police.

Yes, now the black hats can hack people's brains and even leave malware using BCIs. This will become especially dangerous in virtual reality. The defense is the same as that against interrogators and torturers: awareness, and refusal to give in.

Eventually I suspect enterprising programmers will start developing anti-malware systems for the brain...

Spanner 6.2 R4: First Day of Classes

...from previous

Chaos Angel Spanner — Chapter 6: Teenage Wasteland
Part 2: First Day of Classes (Final Revision)

school lobby. The newly dubbed Team Bremelo brave the advotainment assault, which persists in mispronouncing Leila’s name “Leela.” Shira pushes her ahead. “Somebody needs to squash that bug stat.”

Bart, Charmian, and Kelly await them on the other side, backed by Team Valiant.

Shira crosses her arms. “What do you people want?”

Bart points at Shira and growls, “You’re defending the evil Fag Agenda!”

Kelly demands, “Are you supporting those dirty mudbloods too?”

Charmian gasps, “Is that true?

Shira casts an ironic look at them. “I thought I was the ‘dirty mudblood,’ Kelly darling.” She leans forward threateningly. “I know what you did to Colette last night.”

“How could we—”

Bart roars, “You lie!

Shira laughs at them. “Obviously you’ve never heard of the Law of Plausible Deniability, which states: If the Government denies anything, what it denies is true by definition. And since you, my friends, are the Government, the Law of Plausible Deniability applies to you.”

“You have no idea what the hell you’re talking about.”

“Go ahead. Deny you’re in cahoots with a serial killer.”

The three stare at Shira in open-mouthed horror. Kelly grabs her by the scarf, pulls her uncomfortably close, and shrieks, “We’re the good guys!”

She stares mock-lasciviously into her eyes. “Ah, the ‘white hats.’ I’m told you people think it’s perfectly moral to beat up ‘gingers.’” Kelly looks at her strangely and lets go.

Charmian pokes her on the breastbone. “We know you are in cahoots with that traitorous Student Union.”

Shira puts her arms around Charmian and pulls her close, making her blush. “Charms darling, I love you to pieces, but I’m no wimpy liberal. I’m a heroic individualist, just like you.” She puts her mouth to Charmian’s neck to give her a hickey. Charmian struggles out of her arms in panic and slaps her as hard as she can. Shira holds her hand to her stricken cheek and chuckles. “Princess Charming loves me.” Beside Charmian, Bart looks ready to punch her.

Suddenly they find themselves surrounded by a small crowd of onlookers. Bart, Charmian, and Kelly look at each other, then glare at Shira. Bart points at Shira and shouts, “I swear to Jesus America, you’ll regret this!” Still glaring, they stalk off.

Mimi runs up to Shira in a panic, grabs her by the arm, and warns, “Uh-oh, Shira, you’re in really big trouble now.”

Shira hugs Mimi and flashes her a cockeyed smile. “Girlfriend, I am trouble.” She gives her a quick kiss on the lips.

Hidden around the corner, Brandi Quinn watches on. She winks her approval.

principal’s office. The guards slam the door behind Shira, Jennifer, and Leila. Karen cheerfully waves. Smirking Principal, glowering Falconer, leering Mobley, and stern Spiekerman glare down at them. She has the bearing of a drill instructor, which she was in the Marines, where she rose to the rank of Major. She prefers to be addressed by her military rank. They like to play Good Cop, Bad Cop with their unfortunate victims wayward students. Jennifer makes a call on her phone.

Principal says, “One of our teachers was murdered last night. You four were there.”

Shira replies, “Someone thought he knew too much and decided to shut his mouth. Permanently.”

“We have also heard rumors of a Student Union meeting. Surely you know something about that.”

“We weren’t there, so we wouldn’t know.”

Silence!” shrieks Falconer. “You’re here in this office because you’re committing insubordination! You’re supposed to do what we tell you to do and believe what we tell you to believe. That’s an order!

Jennifer finally gets through to Angela. Shira says, “Then you’d better throw just about every kid in this school into the Doghouse, Major, ’cuz they’re all shirking orders and making fun of your sponsored and censored so-called curriculum.”

Jennifer approaches the Principal and holds out her phone. “It’s for you.”

He takes the phone from her. “Hello?... Yes... Yes, yes, I do... Sorry.” Giggling nervously, he hands the phone back to Jennifer, then swivels his chair to look up at Falconer in amazement. “Major, it’s their lawyer from the Wilder Foundation. She said they said we need to leave these young ladies alone if we want to avoid a very costly lawsuit.” The other principals stare at Principal; he sweats nervously. Then all of them glare angrily at the girls.

The intercom rings. Spiekerman picks it up. “Hello? Yes, sir. Right away, sir.” He tells the girls, “Young ladies, you’re wanted in the back office.”

The girls trade looks. Shira and Leila silently question Karen; she nods. They stare at Spiekerman. He steps down and walks down the hall; the girls follow.

Thursday, August 16, 2012

Spanner 6.1 R4: The Head and the Tail

...from previous

Chaos Angel Spanner — Chapter 6: Teenage Wasteland
Part 1: The Head and the Tail (Final Revision)

Youth must refrain from ungrateful questioning of governmental mandates.
Ernesto “Che” Guevara

I’ll be watching you...
The Police Lockheed Northrop Boeing Dynamics

3 september 2014.
telesphere.
The pretty yet empty talking heads of the MSM parrot the official spin. Let’s check ESPNBC:
Amanda: COPCO and the City of Bangor Parks Department have issued a press release stating that last night’s disturbance was a gang conflict that was quickly brought under control by the heroic actions of COPCO police agents. The death of a Bangor High School teacher was officially ruled the result of a domestic dispute. His remains have been claimed by his widow.

And now back to our top story: Lindsay Lohan has beaten up yet another ESPNBC reporter...
principal’s office. Principal, Falconer, Spiekerman, and Mobley stand before the plump stern unforgiving face of their boss, Peter Ross, glaring down on them from the big screen. “Tailism, my servants,” Ross warns. “You must not allow tailism to develop. I am the head and they are the tail, understood? I am the boss and you are my representatives, and as my representatives, you must be the head and not the tail.”

Principal manages to look grim without losing his perpetual smirk. “Easier said than done, boss. You see, our enemy has managed to infiltrate her own daughter into this very school.”

“My school!” wails Spiekerman. “Why did that bitch have to pick my school?”

“And that cheerleader cousin of hers,” Mobley adds, “she belongs to a whole cult of tailists, chanting even, ooga-chucka ooga-chucka.”

Falconer growls, “I’ll show no mercy to those little whores the second they get out of line.”

Ross says, “Rumors have reached me of a Student Union.”

The principals gasp in unison.

“The wild card remains Shira Thomas. Keep your eyes on her at all times. You cannot let her escape your sight. Do not let her make your tail run riot. Do not let her cut off your head. You are the head and not the tail. Am I understood?”

The principals reply in unison: “Yes, boss!”

Wednesday, August 15, 2012

Spanner R4 - The Story So Far: School and the Single Slasher (Chapters 4-5, Interludes 3-4

Before I start posting the now complete Final Revision Chapter 6, here's the last in this week's "trilogy" of recaps, following up on the "pilot episode" and Chapters 2-3. So now, the totally revamped Revision 4 final versions of Chapters 4 and 5, getting us all the way to the beginning of the School Arc. As always, some parts contain NSFW material.

Chapter 4: Special Delivery Service (chapter index)
4.1: Public Service Announcement
The self-styled King of America and Emperor of the World, once known as the superhero Super Patriot, has a word with his three sons, the Becket brothers. FBI Director Radisson's televised message is hacked to reveal the revolutionary government's true belief and agenda. And the former Band with No Name lead guitarist who now runs pirate station KCUF pre-empts a Shira love moment with her mom to reveal a shocking MKULTRA-related secret behind the Conservative Revolution as Oliver's High Corporate father, the chairman of Biotron Corporation (makers of the Bioroid), singlehandedly foils an SRO terror attack.

4.2: She's Trouble
Shira's Touhou Online fan-MMO avatar ties up celebrity NPC Marisa and ends up catching a coveted Glitch mon before Marisa's angry BFF Reimu comes to rescue her. "Great Detective" Locke Holmes tries to pin the Spanner Incident on Shira yet again. Radisson faces the wrath of the corporations that make up the Media Industry Association of America (MIAA). The Becket brothers intimidate the chairman of COPCO. And introducing: the Style Underground, the Dictel Park Slasher, and the MIAA's most dangerous Intellectual Property Defender.

4.3: Last Day of Freedom
Shira and Hope discuss their personal strategy against the Seattle Public Education Corporation (SPEC) after what may be their last love moment. At Mudlark House (Willa's house), the Student Union organizers (including Shira and Jennifer) and Teachers Guild dissidents (led by Hope) their collective strategy against SPEC and the self-destruction of trade unionism. At a downtown Bremerton coffee house, two marketing evangelists Shira dubs "John Nike" interrupt a get-together with her friends, so she pranks them. And the future (as of 6.1) fight club "Team Bremelo" make their first tour of gang-infested Dictel Park and meet a couple freakish gang "fuhrers" they'll be messing with in the future...

4.4: The Hand-Off
Remember that Gnostic gospel Team Spanner stole back in Chapter 1? Shira's redheaded sister Desiree delivers it to the Beckets' stripe-haired nemesis, Ariel Shield, who gives her an affectionate reward...

4.5: New Pony Express
Shira's turn to deliver, as a hoverboard courier. She thinks she's delivering human eggs to the Biotron chairman. Little does she know she's delivering someone else's revenge...

4.6: So Much the Worse
Drusilla Becket holds a meeting at her cult headquarters for those most affected by the incident in 4.5, including of course Oliver. At Leila's house, her family try to work out a plan to disentangle her from the marriage arrangement to Oliver forced on her by their clan patriarchs. She remembers the Minty Fresh incident in 3.2 from her perspective. And at Bangor High, Shira has her first battle with the Dictel Park Slasher and rescues a girl, while foiling terrorist bombers...

Interlude 3: One Nation Under Copyright, All Rights Reserved
My first big style experiment since Chapter 1. And the story of two IP Defenders sent after one Rebel Styles, who gives them much more than they bargained for...

Chapter 5: I Lerned Alot In Skool (chapter index)
5.1: Sky Surfer Goes to School
The School Arc begins here! Shira drops in on her hoverboard for the first day of school at Bangor High. Sure enough, she and Jennifer fight their first bullies and meet Leila's twin brother Rob. Also introducing the black English girl named Brandi, who will play a major role later.

5.2: Meet Your Friends While You Still Can
First, Shira and the tutors have to face the condescending Principal Principal and his vice principals. Shira and Leila finally come together for the first time. And of course they meet their friends. Introducing the janitor, Zac Finney, who is much more than he seems...

5.3: The Grand Introduction
In Dictel Stadium, the Student Council are introduced as if they're sports celebrities. In the school's Nike Arena (yes, SPEC signed an exclusive contract with that company), the sports captains are introduced in a way that keeps the company as the star and celebrity — until its logo gets hacked into a scary roaring "Scream Gem", a prank that gets our heroines thrown into the "doghouse"...

5.4: You Think You're All That
The tutors' homeroom teacher is — the Dictel Park Slasher? He disses Leila for pronouncing her name the politically incorrect way ("Layla"), then tries to convince Shira to join him in the Conservative Revolution — but Shira counters that he got hacked. Jennifer confronts Student Council VP Debbie for the first time. Shira and new student Akane (a guy, despite the female Japanese name) duel with mons in the lobby in front of a big crowd. She and Jennifer meet their instant fanclubs. Rob and Connor (Jennifer's brother) flirt. And the Slasher-teacher makes a call to his old Special Forces commander — United Corporations boss Richard Becket...

5.5: The Battle of Dictel Park
In Chapter 5's big action climax, Shira hoverboards a pizza delivery to a mysterious woman with connections to her past — and the Slasher's. The Student Union meet for the first time in a downtown Bangor coffee shop run by anti-Caliphate exiles. The Slasher tries to stop it by brutally attacking its leader, Shira and Jennifer's cousin Karen, leaving her friend Colette in a coma — but she succeeds in luring him back to Dictel Park, where he faces all three cousins — and a deadly surprise...

5.6: In Too Deep
The aftermath of 5.5. Shira gets a major new piece of information from the Buzz. Colette's friends hold a vigil for her at the hospital. Shira takes Leila home for the night, shares a bath and a cigarette, and confesses her love. The villains lick their wounds and plot revenge. And Brandi makes a call of her own...

Interlude 4: The Rules of Tournament
Everything you need to know about the so-called "Law of Social Darwinism" and the Conservative Revolutionary institution or tradition called "Tournament". Cut to the school fighting tournament that created Team Valiant. But Shira is already working to ruin their rep, with the help of unscrupulous school gossips...

There! That brings us up to date. Tomorrow, Chapter 6 begins!

Copyright © 2012 Dennis Jernberg.
Some rights reserved. Creative Commons License

Tuesday, August 14, 2012

Spanner R4 - The Story So Far: Rebel Rebel's Rampage (Chapters 2 and 3, Interlude 2)

How do I follow up Spanner's spectacular pilot episode? With terrorists, rock 'n' roll, and the video girl of doom! (Note: some parts contain NSFW material.)

Chapter 2: Sex Bomb (chapter index)
2.1: Lethal Lolita
Just as the authorities (and our heroines) are trying to deal with the Spanner incident and its aftermath — enter one Rebel Styles, evil video loli, luring the leaders of Conservative Revolutionary America into madness, murder, and suicide!

2.2: Ghost Hunting
Never fear, the FBI is now on the Styles case! But one senior agent finds out to his horror just how dangerous Rebel Rebel really is...

2.3: Shockley on the Case
Yes, Diana Shockley (Homeland Security Secretary Henry Becket's daughter) is on the Styles case! However, the FBI Director's put scandalous ace detective J. Locke Holmes on her case. And Shira tells them only that Rebel's appearance is an omen of the American Empire's impending doom...

2.4: Rebel's Game
Rogue cop J.T. Sparks keeps track of the Spanner Incident aftermath and Rebel Rebel's ravages, revealing to no one his mad infatuation with Rebel — and Shira. Then in Seattle's Underground City, he confronts serial killer Oliver Thorwald, who Shira already beat — and who is also arranged to be married to Leila Shelley. Meanwhile, Shockley claims Rebel and Spanner are the same, and Shira lets her Buddhist cousin Karen seduce her...

2.5: The Rebel Sell
At the new Game Wars, Shira causes a riot for the sake of marketing and a cheap buck. At COPCO's Seattle field office, the cops on the case discuss Shockley's claim. At the suburban squat called the Penguindrome, Shira and some Wrecking Krewe friends discuss, well, the cops, and the oligarchs known as the Fearsome Foursome. Jennifer picks her up and takes her downtown to... a battle with tattooed gangsters called "Klownz" — and to Sparks.

2.6: The Dangerous Type
Shira and Sparks make love — and trade shocking revelations about each other. Then Secretary Becket goes to his mother, an eccentric old seer, who gazes into Shira's soul — and barely survives...

Interlude 3: The Brown Note
A chapter from the book Shira was reading in 2.5 and 2.6. Reckless reporter Becky Street falls into evil media lord Walter J. Wells' trap and is rescued by the sexy teenage cat burglar called the Civet, and — let's just say it lives up to its title.

Chapter 3: Rock Is Dead (chapter index)
3.1: The Call
The moment Leila dreads and longs for is coming closer: the moment Shira finally claims her for her own. Shira's love moment with her own mother is interrupted by an old enemy: Secretary Becket. And those self-proclaimed heroes, the terrorists of the Socialist Revolutionary Organization we met on the way to New York in 1.3, release a statement to the world, and the official media spread it...

3.2: Stalking Minty Fresh
After a flashback to the pre-coup days when Shira and her twin sister Kira owned their babysitter Amanda Currie (now a perky lamestream news presenter), victory over the SRO terrorists and Caliphate suicide bombers is declared — but who crashes the victory party but Rebel Rebel... And at Seattle Center, Shira stalks bubblegum pop star Minty Fresh to save her life and steal a kiss — and finds Leila...

3.3: Her Name Is Rio
That's the name of Shira's new souped-up, AI-equipped cherry-red Mustang that she'll be able to drive starting on her birthday (coming in Chapter 7). Introducing Shira's sisters Desiree and Charlie, who kill cult recruiters with only their passion for each other. Introducing Willa's brother (and Shira's dad) Ric, and their legendary glampunk band. And introducing Drusilla's acolytes, top-hatted Byron Scofield and Patriot Metal star Jeremiah Light...

3.4: Party Crashers on the Boardwalk
While Shira and Jennifer make love in the back seat, Willa gets some bad news from family lawyer Angela. Flashback: the first Moral Enforcer Willa and Jennifer battled. A Moral Enforcer strike team of muscular bullies attacks the boardwalk festival — and meet their match in Shira, Jennifer, and Leila, who finally meets Shira...

3.5: Your Next Trick
At the ferry terminal, Shira introduces one of the Caliphate suiciders who escaped from Bangor Jail in 3.2 to Rebel Rebel. On the bus, she defeats another and steals a kiss from blonde aristocrat Charmian Fleer (who we'll be seeing more of starting in Chapter 5). At the library, Shira and Jennifer hold a magic show for the kids and make a new friend backstage.

3.6: You Don't Know What Is What"
At the new Winkie's restaurant where a Denny's used to be, Shira and friends have lunch only to get caught between Scofield's Patriot militants and the SRO terrorists — and then a bomb goes off...

Tomorrow: Chapters 4 and 5! Thursday: Chapter 6 begins!

Copyright © 2012 Dennis Jernberg. Some rights reserved.
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Monday, August 13, 2012

Spanner R4 - The Story So Far: The Pilot Episode (Intro, Chapter 1, Interlude 1)

For those new to Chaos Angel Spanner or who want to catch up/reread (and for blog subscribers who never got the new version of the story because I updated old posts), here's the complete rundown of the final version of Chapter 1, now not just expanded to "movie" length, but an experiment in storytelling and style. (Note: some parts contain NSFW material.)

Intro: Press the Reset Button
In the far future, sentient Corporations destroy Earth with nanorobotic "gray goo" bomb. The last human alive and her sentient spaceship realized there's only one thing that can be done: press the reset button.

Chapter 1: Spanner in the Works (chapter index)
1.1: The Beginning of the End
Back in the present day (or "twenty minutes into the future"): The Conservative Revolution is explained, and protagonist Shira Thomas announces her presence in a videoblog post.

1.2: I Can See For Miles
Leila Shelley is rescued by her family from a sinister halfway house, Shira battles along with disgruntled private cop J.T. Sparks against a pair of serial-killing mercenaries on an assassination mission, and Keenan Sasser gets bad news about the future from Shira and Sparks.

1.3: Escape to New York
Sexy reporter Amanda Currie resigns herself to being a cheery lamestream newsreader. Ariel Shield (the stripe-haired beauty last seen rescuing her niece Leila) battles politically powerful priestess Drusilla Becket to rescue the latter's granddaughter from her. Will Becket, the vampire super soldier who slew Osama bin Laden, interrogates one of the mercenary hitmen and gets more than he bargained for. Shira's blonde cousin (and childhood love) Jennifer Blair confronts Shira's terrorist half-sister and her friends on the plane to New York. In New York, major antagonist Henry Becket confronts the spectre of Chaos...

1.4: The Secret Meetings
Yesterday, Shira, Jennifer, and their mothers consummate their forbidden love and then gather friends for final planning of a mysterious operation. Today, the day of their mission, after Shira and Jennifer make love, they meet with their contacts for the final time — and invoke the mysterious figure known only as Spanner, who has vowed to put his tag on every subway car in New York...

1.5: The Lost Cause
Yesterday, Shira announces her intention to liberate Leila from an arranged marriage and claim her for her own. Today, the terrorists attempt to crash the mysterious Corporate meeting Henry Becket is guarding — and fail.

1.6: Stalking the Rotten Apple
Yesterday, the legendary hacker group known as the Wrecking Krewe assemble for the operation. Today, Spanner appears and takes his position, ready to strike...

1.7: Enter the Monkeywrench
The Wrecking Krewe make their final plans, sacrifice live iPhones to Eris, and remember the fallen. The United Corporations hold their secret meeting, with a surprising special guest. And Spanner takes out his spanner and strikes.

1.8: The Virus Has Been Spread
The chaotic aftermath.

Interlude 1: Rocket Ready
You are dreaming. Shira, Jennifer, and their friend Harumi have a rocket. Guess where it's going. The first "omaké".

Next: Chapters 2-3 and Interlude 2, followed by Chapters 4-5 and Interludes 3-4.

Revision 4 editing update: Chapter 6 has proved to be as difficult to edit as Chapter 5. It took me nearly a week to get halfway through. Chapter 7 shouldn't be quite so hard, since I did so much of the editing work during this year's NaNoEdMo. Since I've already put the former Interlude 5 ("The Law of Social Darwinism") into the final version of Interlude 3 ("The Rules of Tournament"), I'll need to come up with a completely new Interlude 5 pretty soon, and it'll have to be Leila-related. I will re-post Chapter 6 starting Thursday (8/16).

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Saturday, August 11, 2012

Spanner Interlude 4: The Rules of Tournament

...from previous

Chaos Angel Spanner
Interlude 4: The Rules of Tournament

the law of social darwinism.
Natural selection has failed. Man has grown weak. His genes are at war with themselves. He is on the verge of extinction.

Compassion, sentiment, and love are the poison that is destroying the Race. The poison has given rise to a conspiracy named Humanism that promotes a doctrine called Liberalism it has enthroned as the dysgenic horror of Communism; the sacrifice of the superior genes of the best so that the worst may live and feed at their expense.

The best must seize control of the machinery of evolution for themselves. They must purge the Race of the poison of blood-destroying sentimentality from the human genome and enthrone once more Eugenics as queen of the sciences forevermore.

The only way to save Man from extinction is to establish a dictatorship that will reverse the damage the cult of Humanism has inflicted upon the Race. It shall purge the Race of the weak, promote profits over people, and raise the best beyond humanity to godhood.

Thus shall Man fulfill his destiny: to wield absolute dominion over Earth and conquer the infinite kingdom of Space.

the conservative revolution.
Shortly after the Corporates and Patriots teamed up to overthrow American democracy, the new ruling Conservative Revolutionary Party found themselves beset on all sides: by rival factions and criminal Syndicates without, by factional and personal rivalries within, and by the masses of “inferior races” and “race traitors” they overthrew. They needed a revolutionary solution.

In the spirit of the Law of Social Darwinism, to strengthen their race, and to cut down on the number of gangsters, dissidents, and other undesirables, the CRP Central Committee decreed a permanent war of all against all. They named it: Tournament.

the rules of tournament.
  1. A man must earn the name of Man by fighting in Tournament. Any man who does not dedicate himself to Tournament is declared unworthy of manhood and called a Girl.
  2. Superiority means superior fighting, in business or in combat. Those who do not fight, and those who lose, are considered Girls and not Men.
  3. A Man possesses the sovereign right to commit any crime against any man un-Manned by defeat in Tournament, and anyone not a Man.
  4. Any woman and any male of inferior race who attempts to enter Tournament is subject to punishment unless (s)he can earn the name of Man through victory.
  5. A gangster is forbidden to turn down a Challenge. Any gangster who does is proclaimed a Girl and loses face.
  6. A gangster must throw a Challenge to anyone he encounters in order to earn the title of Bad. To not Challenge all comers is to lose the title of Bad and lose face.
  7. A gangster must fight to the bitter end, to the death if necessary, for to surrender is to lose face.
  8. Anyone declared a terrorist by the Law shall be designated a gangster and automatically subject to Gang Rules.
  9. No gangster can leave Tournament except by leaving his gang, thereby losing face. Face can only be restored through victory in Tournament.
  10. A Champion can turn down any Challenge from fighters beneath him. He fights at his own sovereign will and pleasure.
  11. Whoever defeats the Champion shall be declared Champion regardless of previous Tournament ranking. Beat the Man, and you shall be the Man.
  12. If there is no Champion, a Tournament must be held to determine a new Champion, and the social hierarchy shall be determined by the new Tournament ranking.
  13. All is tournament. There is no escape.

bangor high school: dictel stadium. 25 august 2014.
Every year, the local Conservative Revolutionary Party committees hold a fighting tournament at every school in America. First Challenge: the contestants fight for a ranked position on the teams that chose them. Team Challenge: the teams fight each other for the championship. Final Challenge: The Team Champions fight each other for the Grand Championship.

The final ranking determines the hierarchy within each school. The winning Team will, along with the Corporate-dominated Student Council, constitute the student level of the school administration. The Grand Champion is crowned Head Boy — and for the next year, his word is law.

Shortly after instituting Tournament, the Party discovered it to be the ideal method of gang control, so they instituted the Gang Rules. But a proper Team that loses to a Syndicate shall lose face...

“Brought to you! exclusively! by the United! States! Police! Foooorce! Defending American interests against terrorism worldwide! Sign up at a U.S. Armed Forces Recruiter near you!” The screens show a black-uniformed USPF soldier saluting in front of the Flag, the cue for the crowd to stand up, salute, and cheer. Then the giant Flag is carried to the middle of the field. “This is America! Let its Manifest Destiny unfurrrrl!” And the Flag is unfurled, and the spectators hold up their hands in worship and cry out their love of the Nation in the Unknown Tongue...

first challenge.
For the Bangor Party committee’s team, called Team Valiant after a comic strip hero. Round one: Ronald Tremayne, arrogant son of the late Chief Shepherd, rips off his shirt, holds out his arms, and roars. But Scotty Waters’ drugs are superior; he throws Ron out of the ring. Kenneth Partridge uses the same drugs against football captain Barton Green; but Bart uses his superior skills and strength to tie him into a submission hold. Donald Murphy attacks his opponent with kick after kick; but R. Becket Skeever is the wrestling team captain: Beck grabs Don’s kicking leg, takes him to the mat with a sweep, and rolls him into a pin. The colorless but effective Lance Walker kicks Egbert Smith out of the ring; Bert is so enraged he defects to a Syndicate team, disqualifying him. Rex Corson pins John Paine.

Round two: Ken pummels Beck, but Beck took more drugs and doesn’t feel a thing; he throws Ken out of the ring, eliminating Ken with a broken leg.

Round three: Lance eliminates Don by throwing him out of the ring. Rex eliminates Ron with a submission hold while laughing at him. Bart and Beck pin John and Scotty.

Round four: Green versus Skeever. Beck makes multiple takedown attempts, but Bart counters by relentlessly punching his head and kneeing his midsection till he gets the knockout by roundhouse kick.

The Team Valiant standings:
  1. Barton Green (Champion)
  2. R. Becket Skeever (Second)
  3. Rex Corson
  4. Lance Walker
  5. John Paine
  6. Scotty Waters
Eliminated: Ron Tremayne (concussion), Don Murphy (broken ribs), Ken Partridge (broken leg), Bert Smith (disqualified).

Disqualified in advance: Deborah Becket (wrong gender).

Not present: Robert Shelley, Connor Blair, Corwin Belmont Jr., Kio Marques.

team challenge.
First fight: Team Valiant versus Flyen Monkee Klownz. The gang bring all kinds of foreign objects into the ring; but the Valiants pummel them mercilessly and throw all the gang fighters out of the ring.

Second fight: Badd Monsta Klownz. They attempt to overwhelm Team Valiant with overwhelming muscular force. The Valiants finesse them, throw them around, and get six straight pins.

Final fight: Dictel Park Triad. Chinese wushu versus military krav maga. The Triad fighters get the upper hand early with sweeps and flying kicks. The Valiants prevail through brute force, pure hatred, and sheer force of will.

Result: Team Valiant rule over all.

Not present: the team that will become Team Bremelo.

final challenge.
Barton Green versus Syndicate champion “Mad Tad” Gorski: a hundred pounds heavier, all solid muscle. He grabs Bart into a crushing body hold. Bart breaks his nose with a head butt, then focuses on punching and kicking Mad Tad’s joints till the tendons snap. Gorski lies motionless and helpless on the ring floor. Bart is declared Grand Champion.

the coronation.
General “Bud” Peterson, USPF Seattle Commander, gives Bart the trophy. Admiral Alan Fleer, Naval Base Kitsap Commander, gives Bart the sceptre. Princess Drusilla Becket, Chief Shepherd of the Church of America in Cascadia, places the crown upon his head as he kneels before her.

“Bangor High School! Your Tournament Champion for Revolutionary! Year! Threeee! Meet your KIIIIING!!” The platform rises; Bart holds out the sceptre and trophy. “Bangor High! Head Boy! Twenty Fourteen! BAR-TONNN! GREEEEEEN!!!” He throws his head back and howls in triumph.

the consequences.
Millie Kim, rival Central Kitsap High’s biggest gossip, wears its black-and-orange uniform. She gasps, “I didn’t know,” she gasps, “that Tournament Champions can rape anybody they want!”

Shira Thomas’ default Style: baby tee, racing shorts. “Anybody under his dominion, says Rule Three.” The professional disinformation broker winks. “Like a Catholic priest, even.”

As soon as Shira leaves, Millie takes out her Darknet smartphone, the gossip’s best friend, and calls every friend in her address book.

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[Revision 4 Final, 8/11/12: Combined from the original Revision 1 Interludes "The Rules of Tournament" (Interlude 4) and "The Law of Social Darwinism" (Interlude 3 R1, Interlude 5 R3). Massively revised and expanded.]

Saturday, August 4, 2012

Spanner Themes: Superheroes and Revolution

The article: "The Dark Knight Rises: Nightmares of a Ruling Class in Crisis" (Peter Little, The Hooded Utilitarian)

First, a disclosure: I conceived of Chaos Angel Spanner in 1992, when Marvel and DC superheroes ruled the comic-book universe. Once I'd discovered anime and manga that year, I vowed to destroy the superhero universe with what I then conceived of as a comics or OEL manga series. Now on to the movie notes:

Over the past few months I've been learning about the right-wing subtext of Christopher Nolan's Batman trilogy. The Dark Knight, for instance, is in part an allegory of the Terror War, starring the Joker as Osama bin Laden. Now it turns out that The Dark Knight Rises is how the American Overclass sees the Occupy movement. Naturally, they see it as a terrorist conspiracy led by... somebody evil. Like Bane. And the common people caught between the Man and the terrorists? Blank-out!

There are three dangerous (and traditional) assumptions behind this:
  1. The Overclass is by definition the standard of the good.
  2. It can only be opposed through terrorism, the political force of metaphysical evil.
  3. Beneath the level of the financially (and therefore spiritually) blessed, humanity is either soulless (thus passive) or evil (and on the side of the terrorists). The Doctrine of Original Sin is true.
And these, of course, are the fundamental assumptions underlying the Conservative Revolution in Chaos Angel Spanner. But instead of a character like Batman, the reigning superhero over 2014 America is the second (Bronze Age/Cold War) successor the Golden Age superhero, the American Crusader, a cross between Superman and Captain America (and now in the public domain). Like Bruce Wayne, Henry Becket is the superhuman champion of the One Percent. But unlike him, he is a revolutionary hero. He is what Batman would be if he did successfully what Bane failed to do — which is what Batman is in Frank Miller's infamous Batman: The Dark Knight Strikes Again.

This seventy-something Cold War superhero, American Crusader III, sees himself as the last hope for Western civilization's survival against the onrushing barbarian hordes. He and his fellow billionaire revolutionaries refuse to realize that roots of their System's destruction lie deep within the structure of the System itself. Devout technocrats that they are, they see the Law of Entropy as not a law of nature but as metaphysical Evil. They see the suffering mundanes chafing under their control not as human beings but as "the threat from below", entropy made manifest; this is why they see liberalism, socialism, and Islamist theocracy as one and the same thing, for they see it metaphysically as entropic Evil, not as the rival alternatives to technocratic Corporatism (and to each other) they see themselves to be.

Like so many left-wing writers, Nolan cannot see his way out of the dilemma. The Corporatist System is failing, but the only alternative he sees is terrorism: either the grand terrorism of a Joker or a Bane, or the petty terrorism of a Catwoman. Like those left-wing writers, he sees the masses as passive and doomed to hopelessness — which is, in fact, one of the prerequisites for the coming of a superhero, for only a superhero can save the masses from enslavement to supervillains.

This is the fundamental premise of the entire superhero genre.

The corollary is that the superhero can never be the protagonist. He is the hero, but not the protagonist. He reacts to the actions of supervillains. Like the white-hatted gunslinger hero of the archetypical Western, the hero must never shoot first; that privilege is reserved for the black hats. The supervillain gets to be the protagonist, but at a cost: he can never be the hero, and he can never be allowed to win. The supervillain is the very archetype of terrorism: Lex Luthor demands $2 billion in 48 hours, or he will nuke Metropolis.

So what happens when a superhero defies that fundamental rule and becomes the protagonist? Watchmen is about precisely that. When Ozymandias — another billionaire superhero, like Batman and Crusader III — concludes that the Cold War will end in nuclear annihilation if he does not act, he creates his own weapon of mass destruction and destroys Manhattan. A superhero protagonist is every bit as deadly as any supervillain. And what is any terrorist in their own mind but a superhero protagonist?

The root of superheroism, and more broadly of terrorism, is substitutionism: the belief that the heroic action of a few can substitute for the collective mass action required to bring down a system as oppressive as Corporatism. Che Guevara, for instance, believed that the working masses were useless and that a small guerrilla faction fighting in rural backwaters and fired by Latin machismo was sufficient to destroy Corporatism. In fact, he wrote the book on it (called Guerrilla Warfare). Never mind that despite the Cuban anomaly, both he and his disciples failed over and over and over. Terrorists, and superheroes such as Batman and the Crusader, believe that the masses are so inherently passive that only a heroic elite, or a heroic superman, can liberate them.

The problem being that once the heroes liberate the passive masses, they remain passive and incapable of heroism. Thus the revolutionary superheroes end up becoming the same kind of oppressors the enemies they overthrew were. That's because they're acting on the identical premises.

This is where Henry Becket and his Conservative Revolution begin. The American Crusader of the Cold War era is now the savior of the American Empire. Now what? Being the black-and-white thinker he is, he can only be offended by the accusation (also thrown at his ancestor Oliver Cromwell) that he is now the oppressor. But he, superheroic defender of Truth, Justice, and the American Way, cannot see himself as anything but the epitome of all that is good and righteous! Therefore, his accusers are by definition evil, in the metaphysical sense. And so he throws the Populists, a category to which the Occupy movement properly belongs, into the same category as the terrorists of Al-Qaeda in America and the Socialist Revolutionary Organization, and sends the United States Police Force (a military branch) to crush them accordingly.

Now you know why Spanner must misdirect. The right-wing vanguardist tyranny of revolutionary righteousness, which could as easily have been left-wing (Green Arrow instead of Batman, the Proletarian instead of the American Crusader), has no tolerance of the unheroic masses; nor can it see them as anything but the passive instrument of the enemy left- (or right-)wing vanguardist tyranny of revolutionary righteousness. It's a black-and-white double bind. Into this stalemate, Spanner throws his monkeywrench.

Now here is the key to understanding Spanner — let's think dialectically, the way Marxists were supposed to once upon a time:
  1. Thesis: the oppressive Corporatist System.
  2. Antithesis: the terrorist program of violent heroic resistance.
  3. Synthesis: the collective revolt of the masses, properly against both sides.
The relevant trope is, of course, Take a Third Option. The choice between tyranny and terrorism is lose-lose. The only way out is for the masses to stop being passive and taking control of society for themselves, in effect telling the tyrants and the terrorists to butt out or face the consequences. Only the "threat from below", the "mundanes", despised and feared by tyrants and terrorists alike, can pull a successful and genuine revolution.

Spanner is really the epic clash between two kinds of heroes: those (both right-wing revolutionaries and left-wing counterrevolutionaries) who believe that only heroes deserve to rule and the unheroic may not even deserve to exist, and those who in effect sacrifice their own heroism in order to call the masses to action. The latter are the protagonists and the heroes of Spanner. To Shira, Jennifer, and Karen, Batman and Bane are just the two sides of Two-Face's defaced coin.

Little writes: "Who is Batman in this context? The dream of a technocratic solution to a problem of social contradictions." What I learned from John Ralston Saul is that the one-size-fits-all technocratic solution eventually ends up being worse than the problem. Little also admits that he agrees with both the tyrants and the terrorists when they insist that the working masses are passive, petty, and malicious "sheeple".

Now a Voltaire quote goes: "When the masses begin to reason, all is lost!" Enter a certain charismatic Charmer with an apparently unrealistic confidence that she can wake the sleepers up...

Friday, August 3, 2012

Spanner Interlude 3: One Nation Under Copyright, All Rights Reserved

...from previous

Chaos Angel Spanner — Interlude 3:
One Nation Under Copyright, All Rights Reserved

The people are that part of the State
which does not know what it wills.

G. W. F. Hegel

Commanded of Chaos Angel Spanner: speak thou unto thy foolish readers, who refuse to believe in Me with absolute faith and obey My commandments without question:

ALL CONTENT IS UNDER ETERNAL COPYRIGHT
OF THE GIANT CORPORATIONS OF THE
MEDIA INDUSTRY ASSOCIATION OF AMERICA
(M.I.A.A.)


ALL USE IS PROHIBITED
WITHOUT EXPLICIT PERMISSION

ON PAIN OF DEATH
OR WORSE


THUS SAITH THE LAW.

Pretty little headshot, head go splatmartinator1 has won another Achievement! Just a few hundred more violators to terminate before the Gods grant him the greatest Achievement of all: Hero of the Nation.

Martin Martian is an Intellectual Property Defender of the Media Industry Association of America, the instrument of its will. Its will is the Law. The Law speaks to him. With righteous terror he imposes Its implacable Word onto the unclean masses — slobs pirates rebels mudbloods passive mindless sheep. His Word is vengeance that’s never free. With his adoring sidekick “Legs” Leggett, he is the terror of the copyright-pirating masses. At random, just for kicks, he shoots a few of them dead. Leggett warns him, “Stop it, Marty. We’re crusaders for a holy cause. You’re making us look like petty crooks.”

Thursday, August 2, 2012

Spanner R4 Update: The Tough Edits, and an Old Influence Unearthed

First, the influence I'd forgotten. Its name is Sukeban Deka, and Erica Friedman of Yuricon brought it up in a recent blog post that links to her new article on this classic manga, "Hooliganism, High School Crime, and Giant Snakes", in which she declares it "one of the most awesomely outrageous series ever made."

Back in the early 1990s (1993?), during my anime club days, I watched the OVA series. If fortysomething me had seen it back then (or read the original Shinji Wada manga), I would have howled, raised the devil-horns salute, and cried out, "rock 'n' roll!" But twentysomething me was a virgin of sorts, and I saw it just as I had barely begun developing the early Spanner concept with just the five heroines, two mentor figures, and four villains of the "Class of '92". There's a group of characters who can be considered the "Class of Sukeban Deka": the Fleer sisters (the first three, oldest to youngest: Charmian with the long blond princess-curly hair, Christian with the short brown hair with pink highlights, and the less villainous black-haired Julian), their mother whom I would later make part of the villainous Becket clan, and the characters I would much later name Mimi Scott and Polly Parker. A late addition to this "class" is the Fleer sisters' father, Alan Fleer, whom I would make not just an admiral but the son of a fascist Argentine general. The twist on my part is which of the "Class of '92" heroines would get the loaded yo-yo: not Debbie Longmuir (who became another Becket!), she of the impossible aim, but rebel protagonist Shira Thomas herself. And since unlike Sukeban Deka title character Saki Asamiya, a sukeban (roughly "gangster bitch") drafted by the Japanese government and made a deka (cop), Shira is manipulating an American government that hates her skin color and conscience. For this reason, her loaded yo-yo is not government-issue like Saki's, but a Go-Yo, in homage to a now-forgotten American comic called Go-Man.

Back when Sukeban Deka was published, 1978-82 in the shoujo manga anthology Hana to Yume, anything still went in manga, while American comics and television were subject to strict censorship codes. Today Saki would not be allowed to drink and smoke in the censorious new Japanese climate, while on American TV (at least on cable) you get such things as True Blood, Breaking Bad, Diary of a Call Girl, and The Borgias, and American comics can get as outrageous as anything from Europe (case in point: Sin City). A Sukeban Deka could not be published in Japan today, but it sure as hell could make it onto American TV. Japan and America, it seems, have switched places in this one respect. In its original concept and final execution, Chaos Angel Spanner is very much a homage to an age of freedom in Japanese comics and animation that is now lost, and Sukeban Deka is one of its earliest pivotal influences. Saki Asamiya may be gone forever (she dies at the end), but Shira Thomas has only just begun.

Now for the tough edits: it took me over a month to finish the Fourth Revision versions of Chapters 4 and 5. Maybe I shouldn't have been so surprised that editing them turned out to be so difficult; after all, it took me about four months to edit Chapter 1. But Chapter 1 is special; its purpose is to sell the novel. Absolute awesomeness was absolutely required. Maybe the problem is that the final edits of Chapters 2 and 3 had gone so smoothly and fast. One scene in particular, "Meeting at Mudlark House" in 4.4 (it's the second big scene), I rewrote over and over and over till I got it right. The first two scenes of 4.6 (before the flashback) also gave me a lot of difficulty. To wrestle these three scenes into shape, I came up with a new trick to help me. It's a three-step process:
  1. take the scene I want to edit in the ebook's HTML file,
  2. go to the corresponding part of the TV-episode script, and
  3. start a new text file as a workspace in which I can combine the two versions.
While editing 5.2 and 5.3, I forgot this method and did a new one:
  1. tear the long scenes into pieces,
  2. write a new outline around the pieces, and
  3. rewrite and rearrange until everything feels right at last.
I ended up creating new transitional scenes, particularly in 5.3, whose major scene I had already divided in half and set in different high-school sports venues.

For the climactic sequence of Chapter 5 I used a different technique entirely:
  1. break up the sequence into its constituent scenes,
  2. put them in the correct order using the cinematic intercutting technique I first used in Chapter 1, and
  3. flesh them out.

It's been very much a learning experience. It's almost as if I've had to unlearn and relearn everything repeatedly, or at least learn to do everything a new way every time I do it. I think I may have left Chapter 5 a little rough in dialogue and style in comparison to the obsessive sheen of Chapter 1, even if the plot is now far more cohesive than it ever was before. But at least I know a little bit more about what I'm doing, and I'm going to take that knowledge into my next edit, in which I sink my teeth into that bloated mess that is the current edit of Chapter 6...